I liked the story very much, I can not say no to a well written mpreg. I loved the fact that you gave a good reason to how he could get pregnant, because a lot of mpreg writers don't go into detail about that. I think that is what makes me ditch a mpreg story, but yours gave a reason and it was very, very Torchwood I think.

However, there are a few times in the story I was unable to see how they got there, this was namely the intimate scenes between Jack and Ianto, they seemed a little out of place at times. But one thing I really liked, was the scenes where Jack showed Ianto that the extra parts weren't a bad thing, I think that was my favourite part of the story actually.

Thank you for writing this story, I really enjoyed reading it!