Knocked Up! (Masterlist)

[ericadawn16]

Title: Knocked Up!
Author: Ericadawn16
Prompt: Knocked Up
Character/Pairing(s): Jack/Ianto, Gwen/Rhys, Rhi/Johnny, Ianto/Lisa
Rating:R
Warnings: MPreg, sex, language
Spoilers:Character from COE
Word Count:68,599
Disclaimer for TW and the movie you are using:I own nothing.
Summary:Ianto gets a promotion at work, meets Jack and things are never the same...
Beta: BIG Thanks to madkatstar_pir8 pirate4evrnavy2 and surreal_44
Author's Notes: This story is very AU.


Chapter One: Preconceptions
Chapter Two: Conception
Chapter Three: Day One
Chapter Four: Six Weeks Later
Chapter Five: Confirmation
Chapter Six: Acceptance
Chapter Seven: Eight Weeks Along
Chapter Eight: Nine Weeks Along
Chapter Nine: Nine Weeks Along Continues
Chapter Ten: Fourteen Weeks Along
Chapter Eleven: Fifteen Weeks Along
Chapter Twelve: Sixteen Weeks Along
Chapter Thirteen: Eighteen Weeks Along
Chapter Fourteen: Twenty Weeks Along
Chapter Fifteen: Twenty-four Weeks Along
Chapter Sixteen: Twenty-four Weeks Along Continues
Chapter Seventeen: Twenty-eight Weeks Along
Chapter Eighteen: Twenty-eight Weeks Along Continues
Chapter Nineteen: Still Twenty-eight Weeks Along
Chapter Twenty: The Party's Over
Chapter Twenty-One: Twenty-nine Weeks Along
Chapter Twenty-Two: Thirty Weeks Along
Chapter Twenty-Three: Thirty-two Weeks Along
Chapter Twenty-Four: Aftermath

Comments

[madbottoms.livejournal.com]

Before I start reading, can you tell me is this story complete? Do you have a PDF file?

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

It is complete, I'm just not feeling well today and couldn't post all of it. I'm going to finish tomorrow. When that's all done, I'll see if I can make a pdf...never done that before.

[madbottoms.livejournal.com]

That's fne, just didn't want to start another WIP. I'll start reading.

PDF's are easy. As long as you have it all in on document, the conversion is as easy as hitting a button. You can also upload the complete document to google docs.

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

thanks

[madbottoms.livejournal.com]

I see you did the PDF. Excellent. I did start reading it last night but now I can finish it witht he PDF. It makes it much easier to read and is travel ready for an e-reader.

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

OK, I will keep that in mind for the future, thank you!

[reddevilpoes.livejournal.com]

get well soon! I'd also love to have a pdf, so I can put it on my Ereader!

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

So, what is your Ereader?

[reddevilpoes.livejournal.com]

sony touch 600 or something like that...I use it to store my fanfic pdf's and read them while on the train or on holiday. you can also put books on it, but the better ones you have to pay for the download...And reading fanfic on it is easier that on my laptop...

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

So, what made you choose that over the other possibilities? What's good about it? What's bad about it? I saw the Barnes & Noble one at the store but I was disappointed with the response time with clicking and I kept wanting to touch it. I've read fanfics on my iPod before and it's not too bad. I was reading them online.

[thrace-adams.livejournal.com]

OH I would love a PDF as well. They are easy to make, if you're using word you can just click "save as" and select PDF.

Looks like a lot of fun.

Let me know about the PDF if you choose to do it.

Thanks!

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Well, then they confused me by giving me two different options so I wasn't sure which one, lol.

[idamus.livejournal.com]

Snatched the PDF :)

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Thanks, please tell me what you think.

[aloja.livejournal.com]

snatched the pdf, will comment when I've read it, don't worry if it takes awhile (I'm a slow reader.)

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Thank You

[aloja.livejournal.com]

I liked the story very much, I can not say no to a well written mpreg. I loved the fact that you gave a good reason to how he could get pregnant, because a lot of mpreg writers don't go into detail about that. I think that is what makes me ditch a mpreg story, but yours gave a reason and it was very, very Torchwood I think.

However, there are a few times in the story I was unable to see how they got there, this was namely the intimate scenes between Jack and Ianto, they seemed a little out of place at times. But one thing I really liked, was the scenes where Jack showed Ianto that the extra parts weren't a bad thing, I think that was my favourite part of the story actually.

Thank you for writing this story, I really enjoyed reading it!

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism!

Yes, I didn't like MPregs at first because they were stuff like Draco knocks Harry up and I'm like, What? How? I know we're dealing with magic but still...

Then, I watched the first episode of Torchwood and suddenly, there was canon MPreg...that blew my mind, but if Ianto was to be pregnant, there needed to be a reason. I've even pondered how Jack could be pregnant, lol...although I would love more insight on that throwaway line of "Ianto. Triplets. Lactating. Don't ask."

Yep, I definitely see your point about the romantic stuff. I'm not very good with transitions and I definitely need to work on that. I also had problems remembering that this wasn't exactly Janto as I'm used to.

Thanks.

[greendrider85.livejournal.com]

i downloaded the pdf and read the whole thing and i loved it. there was a lot of funny stuff in there. i drew something for you after reading it. i got really inspired after and i had to draw this http://greendrider85.livejournal.com/10574.html

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Thank You! I totally saved the pics to my computer and I still plan on doing a post linking back to your post.

I'm just curious, have you seen the film?

[greendrider85.livejournal.com]

yes
its with katherine heigl an seth rogen

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

I was curious because I had one beta in particular who thought I had stuck too closely to the film. She thought my fic was funny until she saw the movie and thought all the funny parts were the original writers.

[zorell.livejournal.com]

Snagged the PDF , thanks , will comment when I've read it but might be a while as got a few to catch up on!

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Thank You!!!

[musicaluvr.livejournal.com]

Um.... sorry to be a bit blur on this but I don't see any links to a pdf for this fic?

Would like to download it to read.

Thanks ;-)

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

http://ericadawn16.livejournal.com/130813.html (http://ericadawn16.livejournal.com/130813.html)

sorry about that, I made another post when I added the .pdf