ext_29256 ([identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ericadawn16 2011-05-02 03:38 pm (UTC)

Yeah, because there is a Colorado Desert...but it's in California!

I also can't find any evidence that they've had nuclear testing there since it's includes stuff like Joshua Tree and Coachella. It just didn't seem like anyone fact-checked it all which is acceptable for fanfic but not published fanfic.

I also found it hard to follow at times.

After that, I read Glamour Chase by Gary Russell and loved it, especially how much revolved around Rory.

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