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Title: But Time Marches On
Characters: Jack, Alice, Iefan, Lucia, Rhi Jack/Ianto
Rated: PG-13 ANGST COE Spoilers MPREG
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Summary: What does Lucia think about her new "cousin"?
Previous Segment: The Best of Intentions
Author's Note: The Sequel to But Time Didn't Stop

Previous Chapter: The Best of Intentions

Masterlist: http://ericadawn16.livejournal.com/113396.html

The Tea Party Incident

"I'm sorry..."

"Don't," Alice interrupted Jack again,"I was his mother and I couldn't protect him. Mum said I should move far away if she died, but I couldn't do that. I couldn't move him away from his father and I couldn't move....away from you. Even here, I took the name I was born with like...like I wanted you to find me. I hate you and I...love you and I hate that."

It was so quiet after those words, but she had admitted that she still loved him.

"I love you, too," he told her and Iefan stood up in his chair. Jack leaned over to pull him down. He found those three words easier to say now. It had been a deliberate decision on his part that it was something he needed to work on. If there was a next time, he would never be afraid to say it again.

"That's the first time I've heard you say that since I was a little girl," she said and her eyes were glistening again. It must be the hormones. He did not miss that aspect at all.

"Faba!" Iefan cried as she continued sewing the purple fabric.

"But the thing is...I ran. All my life, my mum would tell me stories about when things were too much for you...you'd run. You'd go who knows where after whatever and show up days later like nothing happened and that's just what I did. I ran, just like you," she stated, "except I didn't even go back."

Jack wished he knew the right thing to do; the right thing to say. Should he hug her?

"Oh, Alice..." he tried to say, but was interrupted by someone coming into the room again.

"Mama, come to my tea party, please!" the ginger-haired girl running in and stopping in the middle as though surprised by Jack and Iefan in the chairs, "Why they still here?"

"I'm sorry, Jack," Rhi apologized as she came in, "I should have come earlier, but I thought the kids needed some time apart after the tea party...incident."

"Incident?" asked Jack and Alice at the same time. The girl was looking at the floor and Iefan had shrunk down in his chair.

"Lucia?" Alice questioned in an authoritarian voice.

"Monzur Whiskerkins was gonna drink it all," she said and pointed to the purple plush animal, "so I stopped him."

Iefan started to cry and Jack tried to keep his mouth shut before doing something he'd regret.

"You broke Iefan's faba?" his daughter questioned Lucia and he noticed how she was now standing up. Jack loved how she remembered what Iefan had called it.

"He wasn't playing right!" the girl complained and her face grew red, "I just wanted to make him play right."

Jack took Iefan onto his lap and held him close as Alice walked over to Lucia.

"I'm getting time-out?" the girl asked and Alice nodded.

"But first, we need to talk about this," Alice spoke, "You remember that Papa and I have told you that things will be very different when the baby comes. He or she may not play right either, but you can't break their things over it. You will have to share and be patient."

"Don't want to!" the little girl screamed.

"Taddy!" Iefan complained and he kissed his son's brow, next to the scar that was forming.

"I don't care. This baby's going to be your brother or sister and Iefan is your cousin," Alice explained and Lucia's brown eyes were confused.

"Cousin?" she asked in disbelief.

"Yes, Iefan is your cousin and this is your Uncle Jack. He's my brother," she explained and the lie came easily off her lips. He supposed she did already have years of practice with it.

"No, he isn't," the girl argued with her ginger hair trying to escape its ponytail, "I never see him."

She raised a good point, but there was no way to explain the problems of adults to a small child and being the coward he was at times...he was going to let Alice come up with what to say next. Then, there was a smell that couldn't be ignored.

"Iefan, do you need a new nappy?" Jack whispered to his son who shook his head.

"No," the toddler lied and he couldn't help smirking at how alike the siblings were becoming.

"He's been very busy these last few years. This is the first time he's been able to come," Alice spoke as Jack stood up with Iefan in his arms. He held out a hand for the nappy bag and Rhi shook her head.

"Let me take him," she told him and held out her arms, "You should stay here with her."
Lucia watched them go with narrowed brown eyes and asked, "Who's she then? Iefan's mama?"

"She's Iefan's aunt," Alice spoke and the girl questioned, "She my aunt?"

Alice turned to Jack, who shrugged, and replied, "I suppose you could call her aunt. You'd have to ask her, but she's not Iefan's mama. Iefan had two daddies."

He wasn't sure if everything should be explained all at once, but it was Alice's decision.

"Can I do time-out now?" Lucia asked in annoyed tone at being told much in such a short amount of time and Alice nodded. The girl went to a corner of the room and sat. Alice set a timer on her mobile. He supposed she wanted a break away from the adults except they were still in the same room. This also meant that they couldn't really talk.

"How long will you stay?" Alice asked and rubbed her small bump.

"Our reservations are for a week, but I'm sure I could extend them through Christmas if..." he trailed off and hoped he wasn't being too optimistic.

"We could try that," Alice agreed and he couldn't help smiling, "I should invite you for dinner, but I should tell Thomas about this first."

"Of course," he replied and looked at the girl sitting down; so much like her mum except for the ginger. There was so much to say and no way it could be said in front of her.

"You have my mobile number, I hope you use it," Jack told her.

"I should have Faba finished for tomorrow. Will he be able to sleep without it?" she asked and he wasn't sure. Iefan hadn't been without it since he was six months old.

"I'm not sure, it was a gift from his godfather," he spoke as he had told others. It was the easiest way of describing the Doctor.

"Phone me if there's a problem," Alice told him and he knew that she knew that he could find her number if needed. He touched her hand for a brief moment before leaving. Jack listened for noise and heard Iefan chattering away in his not quite english. They were in a loo with Rhi changing Iefan on the floor.

"She's going to tell her husband about me tonight," Jack explained and Rhi nodded.

"But not the truth, she's going to say that you're her brother," she clarified and he replied, "Yeah, but it's better than nothing...I didn't realize how much I missed her until she was right in front of me."

"Taddy!" said Iefan and waved as Rhi fastened the sticky tabs on either side. The second that she was done, the toddler jumped up and ran to his parent who picked up his jeans. Rhi put the old nappy in the rubbish bin as he struggled to put clothing back onto an uncooperative toddler.

"Iefan, it's cold outside and I don't want you getting sick especially in a foreign country," Jack told him and he still whined, but he got the jeans all the way up and zipped.

"Why can't they make toddler clothing for your size?" he complained and Rhi smiled.

"Because toddlers with two parents over six feet aren't who they have in mind," she retorted with a grin and he had to nod in agreement. Iefan was going to be tall just like he and Ianto. Now, he just needed to put his shoes back on.

"Faba!" Iefan yelled and Jack grimaced.

"Faba has to stay with Aunt Melissa for now, like a hospital, but he'll be all better tomorrow," Jack spoke and the boy frowned.

"But Faba..." the toddler complained and his father sighed.

"How about you sleep in my bed tonight? How about that?" he offered because that was something reserved for when Iefan was sick. Rhi zipped up the nappy bag as the boy thought about the offer.

"K," he agreed and Jack was relieved that was settled so fast.

Bedtime

Date: 2010-02-27 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trektotorch.livejournal.com
Very good chapter. Alice (Melissa) did have a love/hate feeling for Jack. This was very evident in COE. I like how you are developing this "new" relationship between them.

Date: 2010-02-27 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateandromeda.livejournal.com
I like how Jack and Alice met again. But is quite sad that nobody wants/ can tell the truth of who Jack is to her.
I am looking forward to more.

Date: 2010-02-28 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] electrictoes.livejournal.com
Have just discovered this serie & I love it.

Date: 2010-02-28 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
It's so sad that Alice can't tell the truth about Jack being her father and poor Iefan, i hope he sleeps okay with his taddy and wothout Faba.

Date: 2010-03-01 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] av-chick.livejournal.com
I love how this keeps going. I'm glad Jack and Alice seem to be on good terms. It is too bad she can't call him her father, but it makes sense. And I love it that the Doctor's his godfather, I had forgotten. :)

Date: 2010-03-18 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] syien_island
Wow, Lucia's a right brat. Anywhoo...
Awwww, Iefan is such a cutie patootie!

Date: 2010-04-15 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
Thank You

I plan to have a lot of fun with their new relationship.

Date: 2010-04-15 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
Yes, the future chapters should definitely interest you...

Thanks!

Date: 2010-04-15 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
Yay, thank you! I hope you continue to love it.

Date: 2010-04-15 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
Jack has some very complicated family dynamics between his daughter he's pretending is his sister and the son he can't admit he birthed...

Thanks!

Date: 2010-04-15 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
No, you didn't forget, I never said it before this chapter.

Thank You!

Date: 2010-04-15 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
Hehe, thanks

Date: 2010-04-15 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] av-chick.livejournal.com
I could have sworn you did. Oh well. Awesome anyway!

Date: 2010-04-15 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] av-chick.livejournal.com
I love your icon!!!

Date: 2010-04-15 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] syien_island
Ehem! *whips out a crumply piece of paper with prepared speech and reads* This icon was made by Petitemerci. It is from The Escapist Magazine's Zero Punctuation, a weekly online animated games review bit given by Ben "Yahtzee" Crowshaw (I think) who is very familiar with DW and has said some really bitingly funny things about it and likes to use the TARDIS in a few of his reviews. I made nothing. Yep.

Oh, and I love it too!

Date: 2010-04-15 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] av-chick.livejournal.com
I'm going to have to yell at my husband now! He watched Zero Punctuation all the time and has never told me about his use of the TARDIS!

Date: 2010-06-21 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indusnm.livejournal.com
I have to admit, I have a hard time seeing Alice forgive Jack at all- my cousin died when he was about the same age, and it was an accident but if it hadn't been, if someone had actually killed him, well I can't see forgiveness ever happening. Ten years isn't that long- his parents are getting divorced now 20 years later and you can totally see that their relationship never recovered from his loss, and that as soon as their remaining children reached adulthood they looked around and realized that there was nothing left. So on the one hand I am having a hard time myself forgiving Jack for killing that little boy, and I'm not even his mother, and on the other, I get that kids can keep people together even through the unthinkable...

And for Jack to insinuate that Alice had to forgive herself for not getting away, when she stayed for him seemed a little cruel. Apt characterization, in my opinion, because I can see Jack doing that in canon too. He can be cruel especially if he thinks he's right.

This is an interesting fic. I think it's a little triggery for me- my cousin's death was 20 years ago and I barely knew him, but I got close to his sister after and this is bringing too much back for me to comfortably read it. Still, I wanted to give you a review and tell you that I think you write very well, your characterization is good, and Alice is definitely a better person than I am!

Date: 2010-06-25 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
I'm sorry about your cousin. It's hard when a child or young person dies.

Thank you for reading and reviewing despite the feelings. Initially, I was just going to leave things with the first story, but one of the reviewers asked about Alice. It did seem like she was a loose thread. I thought about just having the meeting in Italy but that didn't seem like it would do it justice either. It's complicated because she still loves her father but hates what he did so she hates that she still loves him. I want him to earn her love again so she doesn't feel so bad about giving it. Plus, in the Torchwood magazine, the actress who played Alice, Lucy Cohu, said she characterized Alice as a little cold, that she hadn't been shown a lot of love so she wasn't used to giving it.

Date: 2010-08-03 08:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meowbooks.livejournal.com
Aw, now I have an image of Ten saying "coochie,coochie,coo!" and Eleven trying to teach Iefan that "Bowties are cool."

At first I thought Alice being civil was a little fast, but then I realized years had passed.Whoops.

Date: 2010-08-20 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ericadawn16.livejournal.com
Blackpool?

Aww, definitely...I might need to have Eleven make an actual visit with Iefan...

Yeah, it's been almost nine years.

Thank You

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